I am writing with regard to complain about a laptop that I brought from Apple store in Sydney, which is the Mac air 13-inch screen.
In relation to the problems is the laptop itself, it keeps showing the symbol of Apple on the scream but it wasn’t able get into the system. Due to the convin-19 outbreak that I have been worked from home for a while and my old laptop is out of order. Therefore, I decided to purchase your product because your branch is committed the greater quality and advancement.
Unfortunately, I have experienced a worsen quality of product from you and this circumstance has impacted the progress of my work. I can’t continue my working schedule because the item that I purchased is unable to open. As this laptop seems to be a faulty item so I might qualify to receive a new one for the replacement.
Please deal with this matter urgently, and I expect a reply from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Christy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
.... Unfortunately, I have experienced a worsen quality of product from you and this ci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64705882353 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65486430882 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7440504444 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7777777778 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20593480814 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078994923956 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353689453138 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102247431391 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302344780982 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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