As a human beings that we need to figure out on how to relax in order to reduce our pressures from live and what sort of activity that we can practice to deal with it. While some people prefers physical activities that can reduce the anxious, but others are more interesting in some sort of activity that relative to challenge with their brain in order to feel relaxation. I believe that whatever the sort of activities that people prefers is depended on their taste.
On the one hand, in academic of view that physical activity has been provided it can reduce our anxious and most people feel relax after regular exercise. When people get nervous that our muscle will release some sort of acid into body system and physical activities can help it to reduce the tighten muscle in term of release the pressure. Therefore, many people found it is an essential activity that can benefit their physical health.
On the other hand, some people are more enjoy doing static activities, such as crosswords, chess and so on. They feels it is a challenge to build their confident in term to success the game to gain the joy. They found that mental activates is more useful to improve their achievement which can help them relax when their sorted out the game. Moreover, some people might have physical issues to practice the extremely activity, which can harm their body.
In conclusion, every person has different taste of activity to help them relax. I believe that either physical or mental ways of activities are useful in reducing the pressure in order to gain the relaxation.
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment poverty and animal welfare than previous generations What is your opinion 56
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including uses for food and research 67
- An increasing number of children are overweight which could result in many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs Why do you think so many children are overweight What could be done to solve this problem 61
- Nowadays plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular even more than banknotes and coins Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'being'?
Suggestion: being
As a human beings that we need to figure out on how to re...
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Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practice dealing'.
Suggestion: practice dealing
...e and what sort of activity that we can practice to deal with it. While some people prefers phys...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ysical activities can help it to reduce the tighten muscle in term of release the pressure....
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...ch as crosswords, chess and so on. They feels it is a challenge to build their confid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, sort of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79120879121 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38551830444 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494505494505 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1141377969 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308644270646 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129909756736 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665185167692 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201599801725 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03186249696 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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