dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that lamps I bough from your shop last week have some problem. I used these lamps for livestream everyday. It was fine until yesterday. I checked it to prepare for livestream but it did not work. There are no breakages in lamps so that I guest it is manufacturing defect.
This problem is obstructed my job. I am KOL, I work at home and stream every single days and the light is important factor for success livestream. I can not do anything with these useless lamps. I will lost a lot of money if I will not stream on time.
Warrant card of may lamp is value in 6 months. So that I want to exchange of goods as possible as. I hope you will use express delivery because I need new lamps in next 24 hours.
Thankful
Han
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: sherinsusanraju
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dear
dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter...
^^^^
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...blem. I used these lamps for livestream everyday. It was fine until yesterday. I checked...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t do anything with these useless lamps. I will lost a lot of money if I will not ...
^
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...ything with these useless lamps. I will lost a lot of money if I will not stream on ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... card of may lamp is value in 6 months. So that I want to exchange of goods as possible...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 633.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19205298013 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40392789988 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715231788079 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.802902841 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.75 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5833333333 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231142786748 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615505163458 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820966168107 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137824905142 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674141450704 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 8.37731958763 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.13 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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