To
The Customer Care Manager
Big Bazaar store
Delhi
Dear Sir
I am writing you with reference to the query I have with the product which i bought from your store last week.
I bought Mixer Grinder from your store and unfortunately the plades of the grinder are not working probably. I operated the mixer grinder and its blade are blunt to an extent that they are not able to chop the vegetables probably. As soon as i got awared regarding the problem, i called the storeand the manager asked me to put a complaint and write to customer care department.
I request you to help me regarding the above mentioned issue. I shall be glad if you could simply exchange the mixer grinder as it is under warranty or kindly refund the repective amount.
I am the old customer at your store and wish you will help me with my problem.
Yours Sincerely
Shilpa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
To The Customer Care Manager Big Bazaar st...
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Line 8, column 76, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the query I have with the product which i bought from your store last week. I...
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Line 10, column 110, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f the grinder are not working probably. I operated the mixer grinder and its blad...
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Line 10, column 243, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hop the vegetables probably. As soon as i got awared regarding the problem, i cal...
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Line 10, column 279, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... as i got awared regarding the problem, i called the storeand the manager asked m...
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Line 12, column 26, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to regard' or 'regard'.
Suggestion: to regard; regard
...epartment. I request you to help me regarding the above mentioned issue. I shall be g...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... kindly refund the repective amount. I am the old customer at your store and w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63225806452 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41219585974 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8934963508 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19569309124 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851901752525 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689044852577 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11163661262 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893836055059 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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