Dear Karen,
I am writing this letter to report an issue with my office laptop. The laptop screen seems to be faulty, as the screen is flickering and I am unable to use it while working from home.
Let me explain the situation in more details. My team has been assigned a few audit tasks, which have critical deadlines. I recently got a laptop assigned to me from your team, allowing me to work from home in-order to complete my assignments. It worked fine for a couple of days until today, the laptop screen started flickering. This has caused me some inconvenience to me, while I try to do my work.
Could you please consider this letter as my request to replace the faulty laptop with a functional one. I would really appreciate if I could issue a functional laptop as soon as possible. I have already sent my manager's approval in my previous letter.
Please let me know.
Your Sincerely,
John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65432098765 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58257913383 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2058577122 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8333333333 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153943374327 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583524134581 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414269780866 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105295034624 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130614692045 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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