Dear John Derek,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to earn your confirmation to work in General Motors' head office for a six-month period.
I am deeply motivated to cooperate in our organization head office based on two potent reasons. First and foremost, I would like to expand my working experience as I would have this opportunity to learn from versatile as well as professional sales experts. In other words, I can be familiar with novel sales techniques and strategies and these methods with no doubt would be highly effective as well as helpful for the sales department of our organization. Secondly, as my sister lives in Japan where the headquarter located I can see my sister after one year.
About my responsibilities in my department, I will assign Mr Lee, my experience assistant, to check the staff's work out during the time that I am away. Furthermore, I have a fixed plan to check my staffs' function virtually on a regular basis. Be certain, no disarrangements would occur in my department during my absence.
I would appreciate it if you accept my request. I am sure as soon as I earn your confirmation letter i will be able to be accepted by the head office to work there.
Thanks for your attention to this matter
I am eager to earn your positive feedback at your earliest convenience.
Respectfully yours,
Hiva Farahani
Sales Manager
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ndly, as my sister lives in Japan where the headquarter located I can see my sister after one y...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...soon as I earn your confirmation letter i will be able to be accepted by the head...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, in general, no doubt, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81512605042 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99558321856 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575630252101 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4501686966 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1538461538 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262213151833 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970026638943 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107884150944 0.0603063233224 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174692880146 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126773955849 0.0580467560999 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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