Dear John Nash,
I hope this letter finds you well. I have been informed by the manager of our organization that you would be the vice arranger for the upcoming presentation I have next week thus, I would kindly ask you to cover the tasks related to my speech.
My presentation will be held in an international Rose Palace on the sixth of June at 6-8 pm in our hometown. I have arranged most of the things with the coordinator of this palace however, I need you to just fix the number of invitees and let the palace know that we want them to serve cold meals with drinks for the guests.
In the upcoming speech, I will cooperate with two other lecturers who are going to present a short talk about Technology Innovation Management for 5 to 10 minutes. If my memory serves me right, I have provided you with these lecturers’ contact info in the previous letter so, please call them and ask them to send their PowerPoints files to you. Please check their files in case they are accurate and informative.
Focus on the equipment, I am going to require, I can mention the microphone, LED lights and a video projector for denoting the slides and since this speech is about state-of-the-art Technology, I want you to be certain every single electronic device is going to work in a flawless way.
In case you came across any problematic issues related to this presentation, you could reach me via e-mail. As you are aware I am on a working trip right now and I am snowed under, therefore, no telephone calls will be answered by me.
Thanks for your attention to this matter
Stay safe and sound,
Hiva Farahani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 268, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a flawless way" with adverb for "flawless"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ngle electronic device is going to work in a flawless way. In case you came across any problem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 291.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56701030928 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68169851952 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604810996564 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 290.88556701 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3821612341 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.818181818 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 16.8248392259 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220623027068 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789504809743 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380506554106 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101923036523 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638300899847 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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