Personal information such as marital status or desired pastime is normally inquired about by employers. It has been discussed by staffs whether it is fruitful or pointless to share this type of information with employers.
To embark upon, Some organizations when it comes to filling a form of employment usually ask the future staff to present their personal information. Sometimes these sorts of information are of the utmost importance for the company to hire a worker. To cite an example, Some firms are looking for staffs who are single because people who are not married have more free time to devote to their works as they are not responsible for a life. Along with this in terms of salary since they are alone they do not expect a high salary. On the other hand, married people whose living expenses are high go for jobs with a reasonable income.
Despite the importance of sharing some vital information, other information is not essential to write down about including your wished activity to follow in your free time. These sorts of info are when it is not relevant to the job that you want to join should not be shared. Sometimes it is really a personal matter that how a worker usually spend time when he or she is free.
In my perspective, some information even the confidential ones ought to be shared with the employers since knowing them can determine whether you are an eligible as well as a suitable candidate for a job. Conversely, there are a lot of questions in most employment form that are not critical to answering since it is not related to the occupation.
By way of conclusion, while some people think sharing some personal information with the boss of the firms seems a good idea to do, others critique the latter idea as they find it a total waste of time and energy. In my opinion, this idea in some cases would benefit workers.
- A museum near your home is looking for people to do part time voluntary unpaid work You would like to do some voluntary unpaid work at the museum Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary unpaid work In your letter explain why you w 78
- You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect Write a letter to the editor of the magazine In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is impor 78
- Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money Write a letter to the local council in you letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisur 78
- In the future more people will choose to go on a holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday Do you agree or disagree 89
- In many places new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there What is your opinion about this 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, look, really, so, well, while, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.48453608247 281% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 26.3917525773 189% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 937.175257732 165% => OK
No of words: 328.0 206.0 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71036585366 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63192763098 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 290.88556701 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2291783192 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.357142857 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 4.34317383033 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366244292012 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110909767891 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052047826685 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179358017229 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726255712359 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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