Dear my manager
I am writing this letter to inform you I really demand to work at the head office in Boston.
As you know, my wife is pregnant and her family lives in Boston. Therefore, because of her condition, it is necessary to be there until the baby will be born. I think it gives me about six months to return.
During these years, I have trained my assistant and since she experiences everything about my work, she is capable to manage the entire thing in my absence; my cellphone is available all the time. Although I am not in my office, I can handle all my duties remotely and there is nothing to concern about.
I wonder to know if it is possible for the company to send me to work at the head office, I will ask your support to arrange the plan of my overseas.
Sincerely
Ali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear my manager I am writing this letter to inform you I...
^^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ort to arrange the plan of my overseas. Sincerely Ali
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, therefore, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 647.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28476821192 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39125124992 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9071829629 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4285714286 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165455082856 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702614661037 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797634870837 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1286025632 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086633287228 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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