You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
*explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months
*say how your work could be done while you are away
*ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Mr.Aydın;
I am writing to you for working in our company’s head office in Berlin. I want to work in head office in Berlin because of two main reasons. One of them is that my experiences are well matched to the job requirements. It is stated on job announcement that they need an IT developer who graduated from Computer Science Department and has minimum five years of experience in automotive sector. I graduated from Computer Science and also I have worked in IT Department of our company for seven years. I can speak German as well. Thus, I don’t think that I will have communication difficulties in office.
Another reason why I want to work in Berlin is related to technological development in automotive sector in Germany. As known, Germany is a leading country with advanced technology in this sector so I can have many opportunities to improve myself in business life. I can attend many conferences, seminars and fairs organized by not only our company but also others. I can closely follow up to date technological development in automotive sector.
In addition, I would like to point out that there is no need to worry about the work here. I will continue supporting our team in Turkey for current projects by online access, conference calls and online meetings.
I have to give one referee from among people who I have worked with. We have been working together since 2015 and you have been objectively evaluating my performance annually. Thus, I have no doubt that you will make objective comments about me to the interviewer. I would like to request giving you as my referee to the interviewer.
I hope that my request will be considered and I look forward to your respond.
Sincerely yours.
Best Regards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Aydın
Dear Mr.Aydın; I am writing to you for working in ou...
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Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...ated on job announcement that they need an IT developer who graduated from Computer S...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, well, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 26.3917525773 186% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 937.175257732 154% => OK
No of words: 298.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85234899329 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95759255524 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560402684564 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 290.88556701 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3855115897 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214107511171 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619034175785 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743085007733 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102005960809 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566187958657 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.