You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to seek your permission for allowing me to work in the headquarters of the company in America for six months. I would like to further mention the reason behind it in detail.
Since, our company is planning to expand the global reach of the products, getting the opportunity to work in the head office of the organisation will definitely help me to enhance my skills and expertise. Moreover, it will not only allow me to gain knowledge of trade strategies, regulations and tariffs but also products’ global market trends deeply. By contributing my understanding and experience in taking crucial decision of the corporation will not only impart in the future success of my career, but also will help in generating long term profits and sustainable growth of the firm.
I have talked to Shweta junior sales manager and she has agreed to take on my responsibilities during my absence. Furthermore, I shall check my emails and if the need be, I shall be available for emergency calls. Once I get back to work, I will endeavour to work extra hours to catch up on anything I missed.
I would need your support to get all the necessary approvals and email confirmation and other necessary documentations. Further if you could assist me to make arrangements for travel and accommodations. Kindly guide me on the reimbursement policy of flights and hotels of the organisation.
I hope you will consider me suitable for working in the company’s head office. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou. Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 264.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98863636364 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1104897283 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2427773141 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0714285714 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249600798514 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820855214091 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083371949412 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149601413255 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886673019524 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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