You work in an international company, write letter to the manager for allowing extra hours off during work time to attend a family celebration.
-explain why you want to take a day
-suggest how your work could be covered while your are away.
Dear sir,
I am an employee of your company working in the software development department. This is to bring to your notice that I want extra hours off from my work on 18th of December however, it would be better for me if you allow for a day.
My grandparents' 80th wedding anniversary is on 18th of December and we are planning to celebrate this magnificent moment with all the children and grandchildren. To do this, we have organized a family get together and party.
I can assure you that my absence hours will be full-filled by doing extra work on Sunday or coming early in the morning in my regular working days. I would check emails, perhaps replay to some of them and be available for emergency phone calls from the office. I have already talked with Riya and she is ready to share some of my responsibilities during my absence from work.
I regret the inconvenience that will be caused due to my temporary absence to you and the rest of the team, but I really need to take the leave off to attend my family reunion.
I am looking forward to hearing from you and your kind cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
Vivek.
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| 2020-01-03 | Vicky Kachhadiya | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-03 | Vicky Kachhadiya | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 262, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... emergency phone calls from the office. I have already talked with Riya and she i...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ities during my absence from work. I regret the inconvenience that will be c...
^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e off to attend my family reunion. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7320593706 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3129571502 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30103510123 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116989821156 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922760244889 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15916105547 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118918966343 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.