You work for an international company. You are celebrating a special family event and would like to have time off for it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should:
explain what celebration is.
tell how long you want to take time off
say how your work could be done while you are away.
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing this letter to seek your approval due to my younger brother's marriage.
To begin with, my brother is going to be married on 10th December at Hotel Grand, Kolkata. As no other family member is able to handle all the events, my presence is extremely important.
For that reason, there is a need for seven days' leave, as a traditional Hindu wedding will take a series of events from going to a pilgrimage to pre-wedding events to the main function. So that time will be sufficient for me to make the necessary arrangements to make this family event splendid.
As far as the regular work of the company is concerned, I have handed all the files to my assistant Mr. John, who will take care of the international projects during my absence. Moreover, I will be in touch through mail and mobile. Rest assured, there will not be any negative impact on our performance.
I am looking forward to hearing from you and expecting your kind cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
Dheeraj Goyal
- Recently you had a holiday overseas and you stay with a family member who has sent you a letter and some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your family member -thanks for the photos and for the holiday -explain why you did not send a letter -invite 56
- Some people say that parents should place restrictions on the hours of their children spend watching TV and playing computer games, and encourage them to spend this time reading books instead. Do you agree or disagree? 78
- Shops should give preference in selling local food rather than imported food Do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 89
- In many countries a small number of people earn extremely high salaries Some people believe that this is good for the country but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level Discuss both views and give your opinion 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83707865169 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71701098978 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668539325843 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3423132785 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168517383514 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569179766686 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475611299456 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842576859361 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502931236835 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.