You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Describe the training course you want to do
Explain what the company could do to help you
Say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to a training course which is going to be held next month, on the 1st of June, in Paris. I have seen its advertisement online so I have realized that it is about the newest approaches to promote products worldwide. Thus, it will be not only really helpful in what way I am working but also extremely interesting because it will be based on the latest experience of the greatest businessman.
As our company is international, we quite need to gain some new knowledge market-wise. I would be really grateful if you accepted my demand in order to attend the workshop. I will be able to take a lot of advantages of the course if the company considers a budget for my business trip.
According to what I have read online, the workshop is going to be managed by a successful and well-known businessman, Jack Lane, who has always been one of your favourites in business. If we could recognize the latest methods he has employed, we would be able to expect a dramatic increase in sales this year.
I look forward to hearing your prompt response.
Kind Regards,
Sarah Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, thus, well, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.645 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79631453882 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.586657794 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258449925021 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774470785513 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448225960171 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127292589397 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350390284249 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.