You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Describe the training course you want to doExplain what the company could do to he

Dear Sir/Madam,

Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to express my interest to attend a training course in “Automation tool sources for Modular Web Services” from Pearson technologies during the 3rd weekend of October. It is scheduled for 3 days from Friday through Sunday. Can you please give your approval so that I can proceed with the registration for the course? Also, can you please arrange for reimbursement of the course learning and certification.

As you may be aware, our test scripts are highly dependent on test data which retard our efficiency, without using any tool for web services. Hence, I ought to attend this course as it would fortify the technical skills and catalyze the speed of testing by 30%. On implementing this course in our day-to-day testing task, it would save our time by 2 hours per day. Eventually, it is a great value-add for our organization. I await your positive response.

Yours faithfully,
ZARA

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0625 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01431480605 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5881088001 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6363636364 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290545871326 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109155588637 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556541264996 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215721357725 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761399534664 0.0580467560999 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.