You work a part time job in a company and the company posted an advert seeking a person for a full time position Write a letter to your manager requesting to apply for the advertised position In your letter say Why do you want to apply What are your futur

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter with regard to position of Senior Accountant, which was advertised yesterday on the website of our company.

As you know, I am an International Student and working here as an part time accountant for the last one year. I joined this company to fund my expenses along with the courses I was pursuing. Now, I have graduated from the University and received my degree last week, I would like to be considered for the position of Senior Accountant profile, which is open now.

As far as, my future goals are concerned, I would like to work with this company for long term since this is one of the highest revenue generating company in manufacturing sector.

On the other hand, company is also benefited by hiring me as the cost on training for this profile would be saved. Being an existing employee I am aware of all the work and the environment of the company.

I look forward to hear from you.

yours faithfully,
Saurabh

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ternational Student and working here as an part time accountant for the last one y...
^^
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...national Student and working here as an part time accountant for the last one year. I joi...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...nment of the company. I look forward to hear from you. yours faithfully, Saurabh...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... I look forward to hear from you. yours faithfully, Saurabh
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, you know, with regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70760233918 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65372101353 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602339181287 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6182568908 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240978840972 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930873753593 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474470965656 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108520588027 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337310559026 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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