You would like to attend a music concert. Write a letter to your friend about the following:
• What concert it is.
• Why should you like him/her to join you?
• Suggest how and where you can meet and go to this concert
Dear Sir,
I’m writing this letter to draw your attention to the information published about kanchipuram, the day before yesterday.
My grandparents live in kanchipuram, and so our roots are tied to that city. I pay frequent visits to the area. our ancestral home is very close to the “Varadaraja Pemmal temple”. I visit the temple whenever I go there and have a darshan of the lord.
In your article, you had published that lord Mount Batten gifted a necklace to the temple, which is entirely wrong. The original history states that it was Robert clive (the then British General during the colonial period) who presented the necklace. He witnessed the Garuda seva [Darshan of the lord Garuda] and gave an expensive necklace that came to be known as clive Maharkandi. it is used for decorating the lord on special occasions every year. I’ve also enclosed some references relating to the same.
I request you to correct the information and also add a footnote stating that the information contained in the article was wrong. it would help if you took great care when publishing historical facts. As the circulation of your newspaper is enormous, it is highly recommended that you write correct information.
I am looking forward to your quick action oil this matter.
Yours Sincerely,
Sheela
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...ity. I pay frequent visits to the area. our ancestral home is very close to the “Va...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...t came to be known as clive Maharkandi. it is used for decorating the lord on spec...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ion contained in the article was wrong. it would help if you took great care when ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01382488479 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77948574323 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663594470046 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5156303619 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5333333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4666666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161739525839 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046944700678 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537647182643 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828365480931 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639136683728 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.