You would like to attend a seminar in another country that is your work related. Write a letter to the person managing the seminar and ask the details about program, dates, accommodation, cost.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to enquire on the seminar named 'Digital excellency', which was published in yesterday's newspaper - 'The Times'.
I desperately look forward to attending this event as it matches my work profile and the certification in such course can excel my career perspectives. Although brief details were mentioned in the advert, I would appreciate if you could offer the detail information like exact date and venue of the course along with the topics of discussion. Moreover, as the programme is organised in California, I would have to look at accommodation arrangements as well. Admittedly, it would be great help if you could list the nearby hotels along with their rates. Consequently, the information would help me in planning and booking the stay in advance at the affordable price.
As I already explained about the significance of this seminar in my job, so would ask you to support me by depicting the requested seminar specific information.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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- Some people become famous in their early age. Is it good or bad. Discuss 73
- Is it better for children to learn to read by using the online material or by using printed material?Discuss and give your opinion. 84
- More and more people are becoming seriously overweight Some people say that increasing the price of fattening foods will solve this problem To what extend do you agree or disagree 92
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18343195266 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05631118545 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650887573964 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5881123257 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231012315309 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784267985865 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056283574615 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120206866068 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635842855437 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.