Dear Sir /Madam,
I am John, I live near James street, opposite lane your electronic shop. I am writing this letter to know more details about the products I would like to purchase from your shop. I googled and found your store has good reviews and higher ratings compared to others nearby. As I am moving to my own new flat in the same locality and in need of 2 air conditioners, 2 water heaters, and 1 refrigerator. I wonder if the mentioned electronics are available at your beloved store.
Firstly, in high priority based, I would need water heaters as this the present season is winter and none of my family members does not sustain on cold water. I am sure that your store process the best and good branded products and mainly on Smith Water heaters, I would like to get the quotation at the earliest. Secondly, I am very much interested to know if any discounts are running on the product as one of my friend in another city has got a huge discount of 49 dollars on the mentioned brand and it is a quite great deal.
Finally, I would like to confirm that if I am okay with the price, I would get them on this coming Saturday paying full payment.
I wonder if you could hold the stock for me till then. You can reach me on 0018349872 at any time.
Awaiting for your call or reply,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
... reach me on 0018349872 at any time. Awaiting for your call or reply, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34836065574 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39586602555 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602459016393 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2501381977 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4166666667 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113773275919 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441723697879 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351966379059 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615473509897 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350118554606 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.