You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I’m writing this letter to express my interest in purchasing some of the electronic items from your shop for my place.
Recently I have purchased a two-bedroom flat and I require some electronic goods for my place which are necessary. I would like to buy a mixer, a grinder, a toaster, one water heater, a microwave, Samsung refrigerator, Samsung television and a dishwasher from your shop.
I would like to know that if all the things are available in your shop. If not, could you please order them for me on urgent basis. Moreover, could you please send me the price quotation of all the things along with the warranty information and the maximum discount you can offer on this purchase. Additionally, could you please let me know the mode of payment you will accept that is through cash, credit card or online payment and what will be the delivery charges.
Furthermore, I’ll move to my flat on 29th of September, so i would be highly obliged if you can inform me the length of time you can hold these articles for me.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...er to express my interest in purchasing some of the electronic items from your shop for my ...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ove to my flat on 29th of September, so i would be highly obliged if you can info...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66348907711 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0101950594 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230187616375 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858396674827 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421768369822 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108112159784 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528903725162 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.