You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Nowadays the famous food from any country is available all over the world. The import and export systems are largely grown these days compare to the olden days. Although many people believe that eating local food is having benefits such as its environmentally friendly and can get at a reasonable price which is acceptable. According to me, I agree with the given statement, and my incline is justified in the following paragraphs.
Out of all arguments, the strongest one is to prove my view is in terms of transport, which will impact the environment. We need to use the transport systems either by roadway using vehicles, by planes or by ships. Hence, air pollution or water pollution will happen which impacts the environment and leading to global warming. I personally saw one of my friends every month he travels to his village and brings his monthly needs from his village such as Rice, dals, and spices which takes around 12 hours journey he uses the goods vehicle for transport the items.
The other reason to prove my point is the following quote “when you are in Roman be like a Roman “which means if you’re staying in any place be like the people stay there, eat what the people around you eating, wear the clothes what the people around you wearing and so on. The locally available items always will be cheaper than the imported items in my case last year when I was staying in Jakarta the Indian ingredients are expensive than the local product particularly Rice, fruits, and spices.
Thus, to wrap up the discussion, it can be said that despite that consuming food shipped from far away is not as economically and eco-friendly as using local food.
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- Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive gift Write a letter to your friend In your letter thank your friend explain how useful the gift is arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon 73
- You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods 78
- You are organising a trip for group of 4 friends You have found some accommodation which you quite like Write to the manager of the accommodation in letter Explain when you want to visit the accommodation Tell the manager the reason for your visit Ask abo 84
- You have received a bill from the company which supplies the electricity to your house The bill contains a figure much higher than you expected Write a letter to the manager at the electricity company In your letter tell the manager about the letter you r
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...a reasonable price which is acceptable. According to me, I agree with the given statement, and ...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'goods'' or 'good's'?
Suggestion: goods'; good's
...kes around 12 hours journey he uses the goods vehicle for transport the items. The...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '”' seems to be missing
...o prove my point is the following quote “when you are in Roman be like a Roman “w...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '”' seems to be missing
... “when you are in Roman be like a Roman “which means if you’re staying in any pla...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 937.175257732 148% => OK
No of words: 290.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78620689655 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53330725731 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613793103448 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5513173522 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.181818182 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 16.8248392259 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114583275847 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329087557017 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401171005929 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059266355002 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472644804427 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.