You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inquire about the Network Design seminar to be held next month in Singapore.
To elucidate, I presently work as a sales engineer for a satellite service provider in India and my core responsibilities include solution design for the customers. Lately, I have enquiries from some of our customers to design the network as well do link budget analysis hence I am keen to join this seminar. Although I have a brief knowledge of link budget tools like sat-master however I want to learn these tools in greater depth and how to use such network tools to optimize the cost of the network.
Since the advert published in the newspaper was brief hence I request you to provide more detailed information about the course content, dates of the seminar as well as the cost of the program. Lastly, I would also like to know if the accommodation will be covered or has to be self-arranged. I request you to provide this information beforehand as it will enable me to plan in advance and make prior bookings.
Looking forward to your response
Yours sincerely
Saud
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...ls to optimize the cost of the network. Since the advert published in the newspa...
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...ings. Looking forward to your response Yours sincerely Saud
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...rward to your response Yours sincerely Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, lastly, look, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77486910995 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79633110845 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607329842932 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.5110590191 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 4.34317383033 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19126817101 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717014318949 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050318596116 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929390339929 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686135312729 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.