You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regard to get details about ' International seminar on engineering and technology' conducted by you on behalf of 'The national science society' in Canada.
I am farwah ahmad, resident of Muscat, Oman, currently working as an assistant manager in Techsoft and I want to attend this seminar to broaden my experience in the field of technology. Moreover, Its a great opportunity to meet professionals, research scholars, and learners from both academia and industry of the respected field.
In this regard, kindly send me details of the seminar. Viz, when it is scheduled, how many days will the seminar last. Secondly, as this is going to be an overseas trip so I want to have more information regarding accommodation that, are you giving sponsored accommodation or it is paid so that I could plan all the cost.
Further to this, kindly brief me about the number of guest speakers of the program and topics that are to be covered. In addition is their any prerequisites that I have to fulfill.
I will look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, in addition, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02116402116 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92274289391 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4673560804 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.444444444 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 4.34317383033 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215157776147 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070072179038 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675502117961 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101927623492 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791381975856 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.