You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Manohar,
My name is Vishal Bhat and I am from Jammu, India. I am writing this letter to you with reference to the advertisement about microbiology practical course seminar in your K. P. college, London. I saw this notice in the local newspaper last week. I am interested in this course work as my background is Bachelor’s in microbiology and this course will help to get a job in food industry, therefore I have decided to join this course to sharp my career objective.
I am keen to know more details about the course work; I would request you to please provide the details as such schedule dates so that I can book my tickets as early as possible. Further I wish to know about the accommodation, whether you will be providing the residence or the learner required to book his own and finally the fee structure of the course.
I hope you will understand my needs and let me know as early as possible so that I can book my tickets on early basic.
Thank you in anticipation.
Yours Sincerely,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Manohar, My name is Vishal Bhat and I am from Jam...
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...otice in the local newspaper last week. I am interested in this course work as my...
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...is course to sharp my career objective. I am keen to know more details about the...
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...course to sharp my career objective. I am keen to know more details about the ...
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...you in anticipation. Yours Sincerely, Vishal Bhat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, therefore, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61413043478 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81686937429 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0538919975 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0974350952127 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039404010885 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05195719007 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601537959883 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240166209034 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.