You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to enquire about the "Project Management" seminar which will organize at the on-shore campus of TCS in Texas. my name is Yogesh and work for an IT company in India, and need to attend it for helping further in work-related activities. this will be an official visit and given responsibility to take best practices and disseminate it further to employees.
can you please tell me the exact address and data for the event? As I do not know the program details, it would be a great help if you could provide some information related to speakers and topics to <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-01508A3086B116B628FC621007958304" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be discussed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">be</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-01508A3086B116B628FC621007958304" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be discussed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> discussed</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-9EF20599D1C3F3FD08D7CF0CE634DDB0" data-pwa-rule-id="WHITESPACE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="The punctuation mark '.' may require a space after it. Consider adding the space." data-pwa-suggestions=". " data-pwa-dictionary-word="." class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">.</pwa>Also, Will I need to take public transport from the station or is there any event's bus service <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B03AE48B97DAB02CA25EF3DDACA00E3D" data-pwa-rule-id="QUESTION_DETECTION" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible Wrong Punctuation" data-pwa-suggestions="available?" data-pwa-dictionary-word="available." class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">available.</pwa>
I will require a single room to stay and would prefer my washroom; if this is possible, else, do not mind sharing if I have to; however, I use a wheelchair and the room has to be disability friendly. can you please tell me how much it will cost and how should I make a payment? do you accept Mastercard?
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...l cost and how should I make a payment? do you accept Mastercard?
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 4.92783505155 406% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3588.0 937.175257732 383% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 381.0 206.0 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 9.41732283465 4.54256449028 207% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 3.78020617076 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 12.2491999348 2.54303337028 482% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 184.0 127.690721649 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482939632546 0.622605031667 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 983.7 290.88556701 338% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.6 1.41237113402 184% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.977463416 44.8134815571 440% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.25 76.5299724578 293% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 23.8125 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0625 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0306962060079 0.216113520407 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351644267968 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383406336876 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576409173001 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469131999558 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.8 8.37731958763 415% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -36.47 70.7449484536 -52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 3.82989690722 381% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.1 7.45979381443 323% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 37.65 8.71597938144 432% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 41.2886597938 223% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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