You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation, and cost.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you regarding the seminar which will take place in June as i am living in Saudi Arabia and I decided to attend as these seminar would be so benificial to my career.It will be more challenging to me to attend;However,this seems to be more easier if you support me with all information needed.
Let me explain in details, As the siminar this year in USA I would prefer to get official invitation letter from your side so i can present to the Embassy to issue a traveling visa. Also,it have to contain starting Date and the Ending Date.Besides,The arrangment of accommodation during the seminar. Do you provide that or i have to book nearby hotel myself.
would you kindly confirm the cost for me in details so i can prepar my final budget for trip as example, Do the cost cover transportation and dinner breaks or not.Finally, I want to make sure that all these informations would sent to me in order to submit my application to Visa center and to make all necessary reservations for trip.
Thank you for your considration.
yours faithfully,
Ahmed Mamdouh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding the semina...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eminar which will take place in June as i am living in Saudi Arabia and I decided...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this seminar' or 'these seminars'?
Suggestion: this seminar; these seminars
...Saudi Arabia and I decided to attend as these seminar would be so benificial to my career.It ...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...nar would be so benificial to my career.It will be more challenging to me to atten...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...more challenging to me to attend;However,this seems to be more easier if you support ...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...o me to attend;However,this seems to be more easier if you support me with all information ...
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Line 9, column 127, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ial invitation letter from your side so i can present to the Embassy to issue a t...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... Embassy to issue a traveling visa. Also,it have to contain starting Date and the E...
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Line 9, column 191, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...assy to issue a traveling visa. Also,it have to contain starting Date and the Ending...
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Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...ntain starting Date and the Ending Date.Besides,The arrangment of accommodation during ...
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Line 9, column 248, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
...tarting Date and the Ending Date.Besides,The arrangment of accommodation during the ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Would
...have to book nearby hotel myself. would you kindly confirm the cost for me in d...
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Line 13, column 56, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y confirm the cost for me in details so i can prepar my final budget for trip as ...
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Line 13, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...transportation and dinner breaks or not.Finally, I want to make sure that all these inf...
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Line 13, column 227, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'send'
Suggestion: send
... sure that all these informations would sent to me in order to submit my application...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... Thank you for your considration. yours faithfully, Ahmed Mamdouh
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Line 21, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our considration. yours faithfully, Ahmed Mamdouh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, however, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78350515464 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03301351901 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.85873387 44.8134815571 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.571428571 76.5299724578 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 16.8248392259 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194542067156 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725195884597 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488200401399 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113887349464 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250473906719 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.