You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir,
My name is Harsimran Kaur and i have enrolled in the upcoming seminar named "Analytical skills" to be held in November, 2020. I would like to seek some assistance related to the details of seminar.
Apparently, the seminar is organised in Canada, which is a great opportunity for me to explore something new. I would like to inquire about the exact dates of the event so that i can book my tickets. Moreover, i would be requiring the details of the seminar including the per day schedules and timings. It will help me in planning my visit appropriately.
Ostensibly, to attend this seminar i need a place also to reside for short period of time. It would be a great favor if you could provide me some information regarding some reasonable accommodation. Henceforth, it will be a significant help to me from your side.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Harsimran Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'November 2020'.
Suggestion: November 2020
...s;Analytical skills' to be held in November, 2020. I would like to seek some assistance r...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ut the exact dates of the event so that i can book my tickets. Moreover, i would ...
^
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o that i can book my tickets. Moreover, i would be requiring the details of the s...
^
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... Ostensibly, to attend this seminar i need a place also to reside for short p...
^
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...i need a place also to reside for short period of time. It would be a great favor if you could...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...o me from your side. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, H...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, hence, if, look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92993630573 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05282311887 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8992953779 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3636363636 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228945455221 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082858623295 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784850206723 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12705532002 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511871351791 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.