Your best friend just had her first baby. You are currently overseas but will be returning to your hometown in a week.
Write to your friend. In your letter
congratulate your friend
tell her when you will be returning home
ask when you could drop in to meet her and her baby.
Hi Seema,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. Although it is such a short time since we last saw each other, it feels much longer.
I was feeling over the moon when i heard that you have raised a cute baby boy and congratulations from my side. I am extremely delight for you and your baby and i wish you stay blessed by god for your whole life.
At present i am residing here in canada and it has been really a long time since i met you. I am hoping to come back after a week. I was planning to return in December; however, as you know due to pandemic there are some fluctuations and because of this my flight was canceled. So, I will arrive on twenty fifth of January and i am very excited to see you and your baby.
As i have mentioned that i will arrive at twenty fifth of this month and i will come and visit you on 26 of January. Despite of having some delay, I would try my best to meet you as soon as i will arrive to India.
Take care and i hope you will be happy after getting my letter.
Sarbjeet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Seema, How are you? I hope this letter finds yo...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r. I was feeling over the moon when i heard that you have raised a cute baby ...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...emely delight for you and your baby and i wish you stay blessed by god for your w...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... god for your whole life. At present i am residing here in canada and it has b...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nd it has been really a long time since i met you. I am hoping to come back after...
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Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y flight was canceled. So, I will arrive on twenty fifth of January and i am very...
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Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-fifth
...ght was canceled. So, I will arrive on twenty fifth of January and i am very excited to see...
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Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... arrive on twenty fifth of January and i am very excited to see you and your bab...
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Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... your baby. As i have mentioned that i will arrive at twenty fifth of this mon...
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Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-fifth
... i have mentioned that i will arrive at twenty fifth of this month and i will come and visit...
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Line 9, column 74, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rrive at twenty fifth of this month and i will come and visit you on 26 of Januar...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and visit you on 26 of January. Despite of having some delay, I would try my bes...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ould try my best to meet you as soon as i will arrive to India. Take care and ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... will arrive to India. Take care and i hope you will be happy after getting my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.00483091787 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.154502717 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.840409967 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0833333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300892691139 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106733528134 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680108046975 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16404477497 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056542424541 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.62 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.