Your best friend is moving back to your city after being overseas for five years Write a letter to convince your friend to move in with you In the letter Explain how much you have missed your friend Describe how you feel about your friend s return Give re

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Your best friend is moving back to your city after being overseas for five years.
Write a letter to convince your friend to move in with you. In the letter:
– Explain how much you have missed your friend
– Describe how you feel about your friend’s return
– Give reasons that you and your friend should share a home

Dear Jai,

my joy knew no bounds when you informed me about your return to India yesterday after a long time of 5 years. I thought to let you know that accommodation isn't a problem and you can stay with me.

First of all, I missed you so badly all these years. I used to recall our hostel days, the way we used to study and play together. I must say you were the best roommate I could ever get.

you told me that you're landing next month on 5th, I'm eagerly waiting to see you. I'll be reaching the airport to receive you. In fact, I have applied for time-off from work for that day so that we can spend the whole day together.

As your new job is in Techno Park Technologies, my house is just 10 minutes walk from there. On top of that, I'm living in a fully furnished apartment, so you don't need to worry about anything and just need to move in with your luggage.

Hoping to see you soon and have great fun once again.

Take care,
Rahul

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Jai, my joy knew no bounds when you informed ...
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...ught to let you know that accommodation isnt a problem and you can stay with me. ...
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Suggestion: You
...e best roommate I could ever get. you told me that youre landing next month o...
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Suggestion: you're
... could ever get. you told me that youre landing next month on 5th, Im eagerly w...
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Suggestion: I'm
...e that youre landing next month on 5th, Im eagerly waiting to see you. Ill be reac...
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Line 10, column 82, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... on 5th, Im eagerly waiting to see you. Ill be reaching the airport to receive you....
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Line 10, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at we can spend the whole day together. As your new job is in Techno Park Techno...
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Suggestion: I'm
...inutes walk from there. On top of that, Im living in a fully furnished apartment, ...
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Suggestion: don't
... in a fully furnished apartment, so you dont need to worry about anything and just n...
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Line 19, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e great fun once again. Take care, Rahul
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, in fact, you know, first of all, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23243243243 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09357429378 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0069437354 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.25 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291552475313 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946664469306 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060334055062 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149323458922 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514670982529 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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