Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay insurance in your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain.
Why you are writing to them
Why do you think the insurance should not be increased
What do you want them to do
Dear Sir or madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding email received from your company towards increase in insurance amount.
Let me explain in more detail. I have bought insurance for my car from your esteemed organization and policy number is XYZ12345.
I have took insurance of yearly basis as it was within my budget compared to other competitive insurance schemes. Recently, I received email stating that I have to pay additional 500 rupees on a monthly basis.
I believe there should not be hike in insurance costs, as I have paid yearly fee while buying insurance. Also, it is clearly mentioned in the contract that there will not be any additional charges during this tenure.
I suggest you not to charge any additional costs in the current policy but rather increase in price when someone is buying new policy or at the time of renewal. I would also like to inform you that sudden increase in policy amount will affect your loyal customers.
I hope you will look into this matter and revert me with your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Tim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 8, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
... and policy number is XYZ12345. I have took insurance of yearly basis as it was wit...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nt will affect your loyal customers. I hope you will look into this matter and...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95161290323 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63316297082 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0218647605 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7272727273 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383849751612 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125848224191 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778661974781 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171087957084 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693225547415 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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