Dear Mr.smith,
Regarding the three days field trip to Venice, which has been arranged for high school students including my son, i am writing to express my interest to accompany.
Seeking for a chance to socialize with people living beyond our national borders, as a socialist, this opportunity can play pivotal role in my profession.
I could speak Italian language which undoubtedly assist when it comes to communicating with dwellers as most of them are not used to speak English. Besides, I hold dependable experience of visiting this city. therefore, planning an itinerary to see places of interest of this ancient metropolis could be another matter that i can handle.
In terms of details of trip, would you mind to inform me about the commence date. moreover, i am wondering to know whether you have booked an accommodation or waiting for travel agencies to offer. i know reasonable places if you eager to be informed.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely
Davood alizadeh,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11976047904 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81559407758 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724550898204 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4732250819 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23536896967 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736879240033 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471316614316 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112648412309 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485372807489 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.