Your company is going to give a special training course for staff. Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course. Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter:

Essay topics:

Your company is going to give a special training course for staff. Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course. 

Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter:

Give details about the course

Describe what equipment you will need for the course

Ask some further questions about the facilities at the conference centre

Dear sir/Madam,

My name is Sorena, and I am working with the Exon Company. I am writing to do an inquiry about the equipment and facilities you have at the local conference center.

My company is planning a training session for the employees on 26/08/2019. The session is about automation in the industry and would take 2 days and 100 people will participate in this specific course. We were very satisfied with our last arrangement there and would like to have this one also there. However, we need to confirm that you have the required amenities and equipment. The required items are as follows:

1- A big screen

2- Video projector

3- Wifi

Could you please inform us about the existence of these items at your place? In addition, Could you also tell us how many people you can have there? Do you have small rooms for small group meetings? Are facilities accessible easily by disabled people?

I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Sorena

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95321637427 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58263782309 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672514619883 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7124713899 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5833333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164368430913 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591973448725 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459807629555 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794168505399 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310009696425 0.0580467560999 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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