You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
Explain the problem
explain why they are so important
tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Sorena, the social marketer of Redi and I am writing to you since I have left some documents at your hotel, Rizo Hotel.
We had a business meeting there in room 102 last night 23/08/2019 which finished at 8 pm. When I reached home right after the meeting, I found out that I do not have the documents with me. However, The documents should be misplaced in the room, where we were sitting, on the old table close to the window and inside a blue leather folder. They contain the minute of the meeting which I need to be able to proceed with the projects and I also have to submit them on the company’s website tomorrow.
Could you please ask your employees to look for the documents and upon finding them give me a call at 3546748?
I look forward to hearing from you very soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sorena Ashkani.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59615384615 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43495258328 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685897435897 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9038904217 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.625 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235785368041 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884803492958 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775683051458 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150376389198 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818437748709 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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