Your company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter
• say what you like about the uniform
• explain what you don’t you like about the uniform
• suggest how the uniform can be improved
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing this letter in regards to uniform which was recently shown by our head. I liked the uniform, however, I have a few suggestions which might be better for our company and valuable employees.
Firstly, uniform has unique colors and style which appeals me a lot. It exactly matches with our brand logo. I tend to opine about this kind of office atire that can leave long-lasting an image on our visitors and separate us from our close competitors. I really appreciate the efforts of the designer who has put his/her creativity to make this uniform an awesome.
Nevertheless, I would like to suggest some alterations, such as febric of this uniform. Currently, it is made of cotton, but I was thinking that if can shift to jeans then the cloth will get long-lasting durability as well as during winter it would work as a warm cloth. Another change I thought that we should have to have the same tie for male and female, currently it has a separate design. Because If we have the same for both then will show gender equality.
I would recommend that uniform could be better if we can make it darker because dark color excites workers to work with creativity and harder than before. By doing so we not only gain the trust of our manpower but also can get an impressive image in the market.
Hope you will consider my given views.
Yours sincerely,
Rehana Diwan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ear Mr. John, I am writing this letter in regards to uniform which was recently shown by our...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...his/her creativity to make this uniform an awesome. Nevertheless, I would like to suggest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, then, well, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61693548387 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50106311943 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9703633956 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7857142857 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174322691529 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577325238829 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473994273396 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945538795901 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465658730401 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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