Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to inform about the change in my circumstances which have constrained me to extend my stay here in Boston. Allow me to elaborate.
Firstly, I would like to thank you for giving me this opportunity to take the Data Mining Course here at Northwestern University. The faculty here is one of the renowned faculties in the world. The course has really helped me to hone up my skills and get a better understanding of how to do the task efficiently.
Further, the University is considering offering me a co-op opportunity with a renowned multinational company. The professor did not ask me for consent and is now emphasizing that I accept the offer and showcase my talent to them. As such, I would have to accept the co-op and resultant which I would have to stay in Boston for a few more months.
The co-op period is 3 months and it is due to start next week and I am anticipating that I would be able to resume work with the company latest by 20th December 2019.
I hope you would empathize with my situation.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to inform about the ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'company the latest'.
Suggestion: company the latest
...I would be able to resume work with the company latest by 20th December 2019. I hope you w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60512820513 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85423201022 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4021230634 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6363636364 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146389313751 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552028225338 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588185596218 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775008146821 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491057514661 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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