your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and asked for suggestions as how it should be celebrated.
Write a letter.
thank your friend for inviting you to the party and say that you have some ideas about how to celebrate it.
suggest what type of party your friend could have.
suggest a good place to hold the party.
Dear Anum,
I'm delighted to receive your warm invitation for your birthday on 17th July, 2019.I'll definitely make for this day, as I don't want to miss the excitement and fun. As you have asked, I'd like to give you some suggestions for celebrating a memorable party.
I think it would be a great idea if you could plan a destination birthday party. This type of party is quite popular nowadays, since it is enjoyed by guest of all ages.What's more, there are lots of planners in Lahore, who are famous for arranging commendable events. You only require to hire a one that could make all the arrangements on your behalf at very reasonable price. Thus, you do not need to worry about the arrangements.
If I may suggest, you must hold your birthday party at Pir Soha, Islamabad. This is quite an attractive place with picturesque and panoramic views of Islamabad,which I'm sure everyone is going to like. Moreover, there are restaurants galore and you could choose any of them for the lunch. Perhaps, you can also go with self catering option, if you'd prefer.If you need any of my suggestions or help, do pen it down to me.
Waiting to see you soon.
Love.
Sara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66183574879 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70878831426 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671497584541 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5763391853 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330843752993 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120628222761 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720562297513 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186283740598 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812950447865 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.