Your friend is coming to your city from overseas. write to him/her that you will not be able to accommodate him/her in your home. Include the following.
- Give your reason & suggest him/her am alternate accommodation
-Suggest a place and time for you to meet.
Dear Preetha,
Your letter has come to me with great surprise of your arrival to India in the month of October. It is pretty long that we met after your immigration to Canada, So , the news gave me the mixed feelings of happiness and regret. When I can't wait to see you here soon, at the same time , I am truly repentant for my inability to arrange your stay at my home. We would be more felicitous to have you at our home, however, our home is under the renovation for the next three months to get repaired from the wear and tear of 12 years.
In that case, I would sincerely apologise for the inconvenience caused. Also, I would like to know if I can book your accommodation in the hotel which is nearby my home. It is very reputed and affordable hotel of the city whereas I know the manager of the hotel personally. You will be taken care there as a home guest and it is equally convenient for me to come and meet you there at any point of time.
Kindly confirm the dates of your arrival and departure, so that I can book your stay well in advance. Also, send the detail of your flight so that I can come to pick you up at the airport on the day of your arrival.
Awaiting or our reply. With lots of Love.
Yours lovingly
Bhumika suryavanshi
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
It is very reputed and affordable hotel
It is a very reputed and affordable hotel
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 240 350
No. of Characters: 977 1500
No. of Different Words: 139 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.936 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.071 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.262 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 46 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.577 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.689 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.151 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...met after your immigration to Canada, So , the news gave me the mixed feelings of ...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...eelings of happiness and regret. When I cant wait to see you here soon, at the same ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t to see you here soon, at the same time , I am truly repentant for my inability t...
^^
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se for the inconvenience caused. Also, I would like to know if I can book your ac...
^^
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uest and it is equally convenient for me to come and meet you there at any point ...
^^
Line 9, column 29, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Love seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of (Love)'.
Suggestion: lots of (Love)
...arrival. Awaiting or our reply. With lots of Love. Yours lovingly Bhumika suryavan...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Awaiting or our reply. With lots of Love. Yours lovingly Bhumika sury...
^^
Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y. With lots of Love. Yours lovingly Bhumika suryavanshi
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'whereas']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228136882129 0.220444632235 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.121673003802 0.167888034529 72% => OK
Adjectives: 0.041825095057 0.0606518309736 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.06463878327 0.0506257000042 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.133079847909 0.118615021944 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140684410646 0.107062808482 131% => OK
Participles: 0.0152091254753 0.041066498444 37% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.34281122344 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0380228136882 0.0385302599488 99% => OK
Particles: 0.00380228136882 0.00132118243153 288% => OK
Determiners: 0.0722433460076 0.0714148451538 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0266159695817 0.0191574576366 139% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00760456273764 0.00930345855455 82% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1262.0 1141.60824742 111% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.134020619 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21487603306 5.53046319177 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78085437643 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.194214876033 0.284621296913 68% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.157024793388 0.211203875043 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.103305785124 0.133321485273 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0619834710744 0.0843313296314 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34281122344 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566115702479 0.622163163488 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.6531852051 62.8969750728 88% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 12.9587628866 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6153846154 16.4300151701 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9279937973 44.7399317507 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0769230769 90.9928171075 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 16.4300151701 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 0.613754768223 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.09278350515 382% => OK
Readability: 34.3178639542 37.5504026743 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.20238095238 1.13073093955 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348149256691 0.331212695627 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117932582856 0.0927372745006 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0963471342144 0.0736520305886 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.596478111763 0.579516596996 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119566619317 0.180689518051 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136808678544 0.122183219658 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894785408544 0.0765303033291 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.291656627224 0.211926503985 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.168795613643 0.0737400523855 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209162983517 0.203819188451 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127737157803 0.067151250289 190% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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