Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Mike,
I'm writing this to tell you that I'm am unable to go a cinema hall with you. I am extremely sorry for this and thank you for all the arrangements that you have made. The reason why I suddenly have to change my decision is that some researchers from Korean Research Centre are coming to my lab for doing the experiment related with the fatigue strength of Aluminum. Therefore, I must stay with them to get the experiment going.
Instead of me, if you like, I recommend you Mr. Ram Singh whom you can go to see the movie. He is very friendly person and easily approachable. It has been 6 months since I have known him and he is now my best friend at the University.
In fact, both of you have similar choices for the movies. Like you, he fancy watching Sci-Fi movies. As far I know, the movie what you have booked is related with space time travel; hence, I believe both of you can enjoy it.
I would like to apologize for not being able to go with you. I hope you'll go with Ram and have fun together.
Best wishes,
Reedy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Mike, Im writing this to tell you that Im am una...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ike, Im writing this to tell you that Im am unable to go a cinema hall with you....
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Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...r not being able to go with you. I hope youll go with Ram and have fun together. Be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28787878788 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29344096102 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.293548722 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3076923077 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343057149683 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123957531634 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978153823923 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224697655747 0.12726935374 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605380535216 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.