Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear mohit,
I am writing this letter to inviting me for movie show. I am sorry, unfortunatley, I could not make it possible, because of hactic office schedule.
Though, I just started new job with Ageon Ltd., It is hard for me take off for one day. Insted of me, my younger brother subham can go with you, because, he is
free from his college exams yesterday. I know, you can understand my poblem. Most probably, we can make plan for next month.
As you know, my brother and his nature, both you will enjoy each others company. Moreover, you have also greate affection with him and most important both
know each others. while, both you like movies most, so that, it would be greate fun.
I am looking forword your letter
your friend,
Hitesh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r subham can go with you, because, he is free from his college exams yesterday. I...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Free
...bham can go with you, because, he is free from his college exams yesterday. I kno...
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Line 17, column 66, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...nd his nature, both you will enjoy each others company. Moreover, you have also greate...
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Line 17, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fection with him and most important both know each others. while, both you like m...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Know
...ion with him and most important both know each others. while, both you like movie...
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Line 19, column 19, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ost important both know each others. while, both you like movies most, so that, it...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 26.3917525773 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 645.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 135.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28294806158 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.725925925926 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1452026408 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.5 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292242123712 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110096874348 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683113506076 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122235652638 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411156566369 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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