you live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country.
Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
State what your skills and experience are.
Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter to get information about voluntary work. While being in a foreign country, knowledge about the culture and system of the nation is essential
for me. Though I can build my social network as well as fun for me.
Let me explain my background in more detail. From a professional point of view, I am graduated from civil engineering and two-year experience in the construction
field as a site engineer back home. However, during my studies, I used to be a tour guide as a volunteer in the state of Rajasthan. Actually, It is famous for many historic places, so umpteen of foreigners come from different countries which accelerate my language skills. I learnt many different languages such as English, French and
so on.
Basically, I am willing to work with a community centre that is round the corner of my house. Because it is not only a fantastic place to interact with different people but also enhance my communication skills. As a result, I can boost my confidence and I will become independent sooner.
Moreover, I am planning to be in volunteer work at least for two years minimum. In this time frame, I will be able to make my social network which will be helpful
for me in later in searching jobs.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Hitesh
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-10 | hitesh saini | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...and system of the nation is essential for me. Though I can build my social networ...
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Line 11, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... two-year experience in the construction field as a site engineer back home. Howe...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Field
...-year experience in the construction field as a site engineer back home. However, ...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...accelerate my language skills. I learnt many different languages such as English, French and ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...languages such as English, French and so on. Basically, I am willing to w...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... social network which will be helpful for me in later in searching jobs. I a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, at least, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85775862069 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80515704805 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616379310345 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0863062873 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1333333333 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4666666667 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0822100134778 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031258088269 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317487210555 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0384594248732 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405465104921 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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