In some countries, people earn extremely high salaries. some people think that this is good for the country, while others believe that the government should control salaries
and limit the amount people can earn?
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is argued that the economy of many countries is highly dependent on their employees, as a result, they are well paid without any restrictions. However, Some people think that employee's salaries should be controlled up to a certain limit, so it can be used in other ways. In this essay, I will discuss both views then I will put my view.
Firstly, people who earn high incomes deserve it; they are hugely building their country's economy. Most of countries economy like Canada,
USA, Australia is dependent on its employees, because someone who is earning big money, those are paying more and more taxes to the government, this
money is being used in terms of constructing their infrastructures such as new roads, proper electricity supply and water facilities. For example, according to a survey from Harvard university depicts that developed countries are growing because those who are paying extra taxes and contribute to the economy. Thus, these are a few reasons how highly paid salaries to affect the country's system.
In contrast, If there is control on earned income that will give chance to others. Nowadays, many countries population are unemployed and the Government do not have
enough money to support their people, If the Government do not control salaries then definitely others will not get a chance of employment. Therefore, the country will be disturbed and will impact it in a bad way. For instance, In India, The government is paying high salaries to their employees, hence we can see in the surveys that thousand of students are unemployed, even though they have studied from the renowned institutions. Hence, these are major concerns why these salaries should be controlled.
In conclusion, I would suggest that countries should pay higher salaries to their talented employees so that the country will grow economically and give opportunities for talent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15960912052 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78424470711 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5597730905 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34005853758 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11673846316 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638538384747 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159340098565 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729644946559 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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