Dear Vasu,
I hope you are doing well. Anyway, I am writing this letter to inform you that I have to cancel the meetup for the coming weekend because I’ll be traveling on Thursday to India.
I can’t come to a movie which we have planned to watch on Saturday because I’ve to attend my cousin’s ring ceremony on Sunday afternoon. I know that we have made plans, but the family event has been rescheduled and will take place on coming Sunday. So, I’ve booked my flight for Thursday evening to Delhi.
Also, I’ve informed the same information to my friend Ricky. He got woe after listening that I’ll not join him for lunch on Saturday at his home. Besides, I know that you don’t like to go alone on an outing, especially to Cinemas. So, I could ask Ricky to join you on Saturday only if you are comfortable. You both can spend the day together by having lunch and watching an evening show of Suicide Squad at ABC cinema in the evening.
Ricky is funny, smart, and a nice person. He also likes to play snooker on Saturday evenings in the town club. Since you want to learn snooker, this would a great chance to connect with your new interest. Once again, I am sorry to cancel our plans for the movie night and I hope you understand my situation.
I look forward to seeing you on my return.
Best regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...e meetup for the coming weekend because Ill be traveling on Thursday to India I ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... be traveling on Thursday to India I cant come to a movie which we have planned t...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ve planned to watch on Saturday because Ive to attend my cousins ring ceremony on S...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...and will take place on coming Sunday So Ive booked my flight for Thursday evening t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...flight for Thursday evening to Delhi Also Ive informed the same information to my...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...t for Thursday evening to Delhi Also Ive informed the same information to my fri...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...day at his home Besides I know that you dont like to go alone on an outing especiall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, besides, but, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29918032787 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17280765834 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 244.0 16.3608247423 1491% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1049.0 76.5299724578 1371% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 244.0 16.8248392259 1450% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 46.0 4.34317383033 1059% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294158066013 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.294158066013 0.0766984524023 384% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16294666132 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713405778268 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 120.8 8.37731958763 1442% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -159.26 70.7449484536 -225% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 96.1 7.45979381443 1288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.14 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.0 7.59969072165 237% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 99.6 8.54432989691 1166% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 121.0 8.15463917526 1484% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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