It is observed that shopping on the internet is increasing in its popularity. Why is it so? Is it a good or bad development?
In today’s world, with the advent of technology, the acceptance of online shopping is rapidly increasing day-by-day. As every coin has two sides, even this development has its own merits and demerits. In this essay, I will discuss why buying products via the internet has gained its popularity and the pros and cons of this development.
To commence with, the three main reasons for the vogue of e-commerce among the general public. The first and foremost is that people want to stay at home, and they can order anything with the help of the internet because online shopping can be done anywhere at any time around the world. Secondly, e-commerce gives a wide range of options to explore the products of our interest whereas commercial market shops have limited options available. Thirdly, some of the e-commerce websites offer cash delivery options. Consequently, consumers are not worried about sharing the details of credit cards online. Thus, shopping online has become a common practice nowadays.
There are numerous benefits to shop online instead of going to markets for buying products. Chiefly, the reduction of traffic congestion on roads and overcrowding in shopping malls. Moreover, it has provided tremendous choices of items listed on e-commerce platforms. However, sometimes the quality of a product as mentioned online was not fulfill by some of the manufacturers as they only want to make money instead of selling good quality items online. But, this problem has been solved by e-commerce companies by providing feedback options and returning policy options on each product that is listed on their websites.
To recapitulate, in consonance with my perception, the rising demand for shopping on the internet is a good development for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13120567376 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60984476043 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 282.0 20.2975951904 1389% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1447.0 106.682146367 1356% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 282.0 20.7667163134 1358% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 96.0 7.06120827912 1360% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195491040398 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195491040398 0.084324248473 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137675380585 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855365281756 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 143.7 13.0946893788 1097% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -214.75 50.2224549098 -428% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 113.3 11.3001002004 1003% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.95 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.88 8.58950901804 255% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 114.8 10.1190380762 1134% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 10.7795591182 510% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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