You went to your friend's house and had a meal. Write a letter to your friend thanking him and his family for the meal • Tell you enjoyed about the meal – The food was delicious which was made by your mum, especially desert • Thanks to his parents and what you think about them – They are lovely • Suggest arrangements for his invite at your place
Dear Rohan,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and happiness. I’m writing this letter to express my gratitude for an auspicious dinner that your family hosted for me at your house recently, and want to invite you to my place on coming Sunday for a dinner.
The experience was wonderful in visiting you and your family. Your parents are amazing, lovely, and joyful to the depth of heart. Such a welcoming family with a warm heart you all are and on top of this is the icing your mother is one of the best cooks that I’ve ever met. She cooked a delicious meal along with a never forgetting tasteful lemon cheesecake. Also, I still remember the main course menu, especially the taste of dal makhani that you served me with a soft piece of bread.
As I said, I’m throwing a birthday party for my mother next Sunday, so, I want you and your family to come to this party. My mother would love to have you around on her special day since it’s good to have family and friends on such occasions. Moreover, could you suggest setting up the dinner menu for the event? If that's not too much to ask, please update me with some special and tasty cuisines your family would like to eat. In this way, I can finalize the menu according to our families.
I am hoping to see you at the party.
Regards,
Shwatank
- You saw a brochure for a one week walking tour in the mountains You re very interested in taking part but you re not very fit and are worried you wouldn t be able to keep up Write to the tour operator In your letter Explain why you re interested in the to 87
- Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot join him Another friend of yours is willing to go Write a letter to your friend In your letter explain why you cannot go anymore say who can go instead of you say why this person i 73
- You have been invited to give a talk at a local community college in America about your home country Write a letter to the secretary of the college In your letter accept the invitation and offer a possible summarize what information you will include in th 78
- Some people believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at school Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Your friend is about to move into a new house Write a letter to this friend In your letter offer to help him her to move explain how exactly you can help ask him her questions about the new house 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...you in the best of health and happiness Im writing this letter to express my grati...
^^
Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o my place on coming Sunday for a dinner The experience was wonderful in visiting...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ur mother is one of the best cooks that Ive ever met She cooked a delicious meal al...
^^^
Line 6, column 11, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...with a soft piece of bread As I said Im throwing a birthday party for my mother...
^^
Line 6, column 308, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ing up the dinner menu for the event If thats not too much to ask please update me wi...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27642276423 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12492782535 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565040650407 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 246.0 16.3608247423 1504% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1052.0 76.5299724578 1375% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 246.0 16.8248392259 1462% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 4.34317383033 668% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304308582078 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.304308582078 0.0766984524023 397% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176457039958 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595539423718 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 121.7 8.37731958763 1453% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -161.29 70.7449484536 -228% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 96.9 7.45979381443 1299% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.02 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.15 7.59969072165 239% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 8.62886597938 591% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 100.4 8.54432989691 1175% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 122.0 8.15463917526 1496% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.