It is observed that shopping on the internet is increasing in its popularity. Why is it so? Is it a good or bad development?
Internet is one of the most hottest cake created by tech engineers in this modern world which has made our life easier and simpler that can be observed by increasing it's welcoming among general public. The essay will briefly describe about that why internet is so popular nowadays, and it's development in this modern era.
Apparently, shoppers find it more convenient to use the services of internet in the duration of shopping their desired items. The prominent reasons to shop on the e-commerce websites has given it's own merits and well-known development. Firstly, individuals have myriad variety of choices to shop on the e-commerce platforms because it gives the myriad variety of choices and options before purchasing any product. In addition, the purchased item will come under a best suitable price on the internet rather than buying it from a local commercial market. For instance, Buying a new mobile phone with the best configuration along with it's best price on Amazon and Flipkart can be a suited reason of popularity on shopping internet for modern world.
Secondly, due to the innovation of internet and shopping websites, shopaholics can shop at anytime anywhere around the world because it's so convenient that people can just a click a button and the purchased item will be delivered to their doorstep. With such kind of development, online shopping has become a latest fashion in this modern world. Thirdly, some of the well-known e-commerce websites such as Amazon, Flipkart, Alibaba, and others have provided the secured way of shopping by provided cash on delivery services on their shopping portal because many fraudulent activities were going in the beginning of virtual shopping. However, with the overcome of cash on delivery services and reviews on the products before purchasing any item by shoppers helped down to removed the corrupt activities. The above three reasons are enough the justify the good development of online shopping and it's popularity among modern public.
To conclude, electronic shopping has provided a good development with many prime reasons like convenient in timing, wide options to select any product, and the best prices. And, with these reasons the popularity has increased among shopaholics in the modern world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ies. The above three reasons are enough the justify the good development of online shopping...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, briefly, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25274725275 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70247016758 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505494505495 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3278263385 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.571428571 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318053077021 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111164564541 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821572279277 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200765492754 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568413616621 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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