Dear Stan,
It has been a long time since we last saw, but I have not forgotten all the good times we spent together. I am writing this letter to you because of the job interview that you applied for recently. What is the nature of the job you applied for? Knowing the nature of a job is expedient so that you can understand it better.
However, there are a few challenges that one can experience at work. To explain, some people experience a lot of pressure when they're working with people from different origins, Understanding teamwork will help reduce the pressure. Also, tolerance is needed whenever you are at a workplace because it is very good for business.
When you attend the job interview, there are some important things you should note. It is important you do not appear nervous once you are seated for the interview, and make sure you arrive early at the venue. In addition, you don't need to clap your hands while talking, but make sure you maintain eye contact with the interviewer.
All the best.
Adam.
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- In many countries imprisonment is the most common solution to crimes However some people believe that better education will be a more effective solution To what extent do you agree or disagree
- Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your opinion and include relevant examples 56
- You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick Write to another classmate and invite him her to the p 73
- some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centres while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution discuss both sides and give your opinion I need to score 7 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Stan, It has been a long time since we last sa...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...expedient so that you can understand it better. However, there are a few challenge...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...eople experience a lot of pressure when theyre working with people from different orig...
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Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ve early at the venue. In addition, you dont need to clap your hands while talking, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68681318681 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49000538077 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620879120879 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1092980004 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5454545455 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174082057896 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816646438366 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646316871663 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121336909329 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354380344873 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.