Your friend has asked you about the course details you recently did in a training centre. Explain about the course details, why should your friend take this course and how has the course benefitted you.
Dear Sally,
Hi how are you doing there? I am really loving my training here in the English centre here in Cambridge.
I am writing to you to explain this module. To start with, this kind of training will give you an edge into communicating to other people. Specifically to a English speaking nation another, is that you can also take IELTS in order for you to become a university professor if wish to.
You should take this course since that it will give an in depth understanding to the English language. As well as give you a lot of confidence when communicating in your house or in you work place. It is also cheap when you enroll right now that includes a lot of perks like exercise materials, 1 on 1 coaching and Lesson materials.
If you want me to accompany you to enroll just give me a call or email me at gai@mail.com. There is no enrollment period since that it is a module base type of a training.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Bill
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sally, Hi how are you doing there? I am really ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ally, Hi how are you doing there? I am really loving my training here in the English centre ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cating to other people. Specifically to a English speaking nation another, is tha...
^
Line 9, column 153, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'type of'.
Suggestion: type of
...t period since that it is a module base type of a training. I look forward to hearing ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, well, kind of, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45604395604 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64822055213 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4485939372 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5833333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293837388702 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103227707405 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743981178792 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145186789757 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689444408429 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.