Your friend has offered to sell you something. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter include:
What the item is
Questions requesting details of the item being sold
What price you think is fair
Dear John,
I hope you’re doing fine and thank you for your offer.
Your offer comes at a perfect timing as I’ve been looking for a new camera for several weeks now. I was looking for a Canon EOS 7D with a 18-50mm lens which corresponds exactly to the one you’re selling. You told me that you will provide a charger and a European adapter which is really great.
However, I have few question regarding some technical details. Does it comes with a bag? Can I use a Nikon lens with the camera? Do you provide any post-treatment software with it? And what about taking pictures at night?
I really like this brand and would like to buy it. I had a look online and found that a new one will cost me $2000 for the camera alone. I would offer $1500 as it has been barely used. I would also like to ask you for a combined price for the camera and all the accessories described above.
I can’t wait to hear from you.
With love,
Peter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... I was looking for a Canon EOS 7D with a 18-50mm lens which corresponds exactly ...
^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'few questions'.
Suggestion: few questions
...h is really great. However, I have few question regarding some technical details. Does ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 72, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'come'?
Suggestion: come
...garding some technical details. Does it comes with a bag? Can I use a Nikon lens with...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 72, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'come'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: come
...garding some technical details. Does it comes with a bag? Can I use a Nikon lens with...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 136, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... will cost me 000 for the camera alone. I would offer 500 as it has been barely u...
^
Line 17, column 182, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d offer 500 as it has been barely used. I would also like to ask you for a combin...
^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l the accessories described above. I can't wait to hear from you. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48314606742 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3780242574 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0894406195 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.2 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8666666667 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138097577334 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463263483897 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522292908663 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990194267022 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635593203662 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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