Your friend has recently written to you to find out about your college. Letter to your friend:
why you chose this college
what you like most about your college and what you don’t like about your college;
would you recommend it to your friend to join your college.”
Dear Ashima,
I’m glad to hear from you. I was thrilled to know that you are considering my college to join. Since you asked some information about Hansraj College in your last letter, I thought I would write to you.
Actually, I joined this college because of its huge campus and its excellent reputation in placing students at the time of job interviews. It has the biggest library and 5 different computer labs with hi-tech computers. Moreover, it invites maximum number of companies for in house job placement.
You won’t believe that It has the best teachers of its town and mostly they are phd’s or doctors. They really guide you in best possible way to succeed in exams as well as in life which I love the most. What I don’t like is its location. It’s very remote and has very less connectivity. Anyways, this is not much of the issue as I know driving.
Actually, it’s really good college and I’m lucky that I got admission in it. Never the less, It’s admission still open and I would recommend you to fill its application form as soon as possible.
Best regards,
Priyanka
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-09-08 | nainsi1991@gmail.com | 73 | view |
| 2020-09-08 | nainsi1991@gmail.com | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...phd’s or doctors. They really guide you in best possible way to succeed in exams as wel...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...d I’m lucky that I got admission in it. Never the less, It’s admission still open and...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, if, moreover, really, so, still, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75257731959 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51928474397 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634020618557 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0818468602 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8571428571 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8571428571 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316442022532 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882508733656 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105297661832 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178463452986 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150829543903 0.0580467560999 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.