Your friend has a travel company and would like you to come and work with him.
Write a letter replying to your friend's offer. In your letter:
• explain what you know about your friend's company
• choose whether you accept or decline the offer
• give reasons for your choice
Dear Wasim,
Wow! It has been long time since last we wrote. Hope your family is well and things going your way.I received your letter yesterday and I am glad to know that you have offered me to join your travel company.
As I am aware that when we were due to our graduation you informed me about your plans for opening Travel Company. Finally you started your own Travel Company and gave kick-start to your business career. I am thrilled to learn that your travel company is expanding successfully gradually across the globe. Recent inclusion of Georgia holiday destination has attracted many customers as very few travel companies offer this destination.
It was my honor that you have offered me post of “Area Manager” in your company. However, I would like to turn down the offer as I recently started my construction business mainly as contractor and have undertaken contracts of worth of INR 40 Crore. Its perfect start for me as well as my business career and i am so happy for the same. I hope you will understand.
I wish I could have joined your company and work with you! Anyway I am really happy for you and wish you to excel in your business very rapidly.
Please convey my regards to Sonia and your children. I look forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Rakesh Soni
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-04-19 | rakeshsoni86 | 69 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...amily is well and things going your way.I received your letter yesterday and I am...
^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... your plans for opening Travel Company. Finally you started your own Travel Company and...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Crore' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'crores'.
Suggestion: Crores
...undertaken contracts of worth of INR 40 Crore. Its perfect start for me as well as my...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...or me as well as my business career and i am so happy for the same. I hope you wi...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, finally, however, look, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7347826087 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52169790071 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7364343666 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7857142857 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389626697841 0.216113520407 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131735285929 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108429412427 0.0603063233224 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239338725464 0.12726935374 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810959436033 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.